I’m working on my campaign front, and somehow the grim portents just don’t feel … right. They feel kinda boring even though there is progress. Would some of you being willing to take a look at them and offer some suggestions or critiques? This is my first time filling out the campaign front.
Please forgive the brackets. I had to leave home suddenly due to an emergency and didn’t bring my notes. Will fill in that information later when I am back home.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ktheRjo3NVliMkoxNJIcAM6p_JghUBh_zQElzlLPBZ8/edit?usp=sharing