p. 13-14 Cleric Feedback
Thaumaturgy should be named “Miracle” or “Petition” or something other than thaumaturgy. That word is a little overloaded in DW hacks in my experience.
“Imposes on you a task” is weird language “imposes a task on you” would be better.
Holy Petitioner seems really weak, complete a quest for +1 forward doesn’t seem like much especially with the level 6+ and move prereqs.
Cheat Death Again should just be called Cheat Death?
Rebuke is good, but name doesn’t exactly match flavor, maybe “Commandment” or “Edict” or “Decree” instead.
Anathema needs a different trigger. As is it’s a win more move. If I’m already “striking down” (i.e. killing) an enemy why do I need to risk negative consequences to disintegrate it?
Good points all around. We’ll be fixing up the Cleric, and pretty much to these specifications!