Hi, this is the monster I’ve made. If you got any criticisms or opinions, please write. I’ve also made the drawing (half finished right now). Hope someone will use it. Thanks.
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2aqCnT4I_LiLWgtQ25NeV92bW8/edit?usp=sharing
I really like the concept! Typically, a monster deals the same amount of damage whether they punch you, bite you, or throw you into a wall.
For the moves, what about:
– Sense when someone’s broken their webs
– Spin massive webs
– Poison someone
For the custom move, I’d word it as a “you don’t” sort of thing. Here’s how I’d reword it:
When you free yourself from the web of a spidermonkey, roll+STR. On a 10+, choose two. On a 7-9, choose one.
– You don’t get tangled up in the webs, taking -1 Forward.
– The spidermonkey isn’t alerted to your presence.
– You don’t have to leave something behind to escape.
For the poison, it’s the same as the Thief poison Oil of Tagit. Is this intentional? If not, then perhaps:
The target’s muscles freeze up over the next minute, eventually paralyzing them.
Thanks, Dungeon World is new system for me and it’s fun try to do something with picture I made earlier. I’ll take your advice and edit pdf. Thanks, a lot.
that picture is actually quite scary.