So to go with some of the other pictures I uploaded and monsters, looking for a custom move. I know the folks here in the community are super helpful for making sure moves aren’t flat or boring or uninteresting so helpful advice is welcome on this move.
I like the idea of crowded tent markets like the one in the picture. At some point I could easily see there being a chase, such as when a lost one grabs something from the pcs. So here is my custom move for a chase through the crowded tent markets surrounding the ruins of Wang Fu.
When you chase a dangerous person/thing through the crowded tent markets of Wang Fu roll + DEX: *on a 10+, choose 3 *on a 7-9, choose 2
– You avoid crashing into someone’s stall and knocking all of you over with a load crash that breaks several valuable things (implied you still “catch” them)
– You manage to catch them before they get to others who can help them
– You manage to catch them before the chase has gotten the attention of locals that are likely to surround a group causing trouble in the markets
– You manage to catch them, but you are winded taking -1 forward on your next STR, DEX, or CON move.
Looking for any help in making this a better move.