Tag: Frederik Peder Finnerup Juel

The Twisted Knight release!

Intro:

“A symbol of hope, a champion of the innocents, praised by men and women alike, a true hero. In your previous life you were all of these things, but something changed you. You are a knight, but you are also something more… Will you cling to your past, or embrace your newfound unholy powers? Hide your true form, or release the darkness within!”

Credits: I have used a few moves and ideas from the Paladin class. I’ve also borrowed a move from Deios’ Vampire Compendium Class, as well as some ideas from Peter Johansen’s Vampire class.

I also want to thank everyone here, on Discord, and on Reddit for the valuable feedback. If not for you, this class would probably have been a lot less interesting 🙂

30-01-19 edit: Based on feedback from TonyxRd and Magnus_Tesshu I’ve decided to replace the 2 charge moves with new more interesting moves, changed the wording in Need to Feed, and changed Just a Flesh Wound slightly 🙂 (Same link)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Kc90Xuo6tM27iSZbd0_GTsvlTHWWOiQs/view?usp=sharing

Hey I’ve created a custom class based on a “Fallen Paladin” type character. I’ve already shared it on Reddit, and implemented some feedback from there. Now I’m asking the smartest Dungeon World community 😉

What do you guys and gals think? Any suggestions for major changes, move name changes, switching moves between 1-5 and 6-10, etc? I’m open to anything 🙂

Version 0.5: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Gg9XA-XNcKi_XIG6CDjKtNDLNg9tfC-p/view?usp=sharing

Edit: alright, a LOT has changed since I first posted here, and a lot has changed since version 4, thanks to valuable feedback from Jeremy Strandberg on Discord and an IRL friend. The only thing I don’t like in this version, is that the “racials” feel a bit weak now, but I can live with that, this is a pretty complex class anyway.