I made this for a friend who wanted “a super simple RPG without a bunch of fiddly stuff to worry about where we can just tell a cool story”. I showed him Dungeon World and Fate, but he wanted something even more simple than both.
I understand that this is overly simplified for many of your tastes, and the way in which things are worded can be improved. It’s based heavily on Dungeon World and Fate, plus a bit of The Indie Hack (“details”) and comes in at two pages – ideally printed back-to-back so as to take up only one sheet of paper (which he has done, and laminated).
He has played it twice with different groups and has enjoyed the simplicity while still finding it gave he and his players plenty of narrative control.
What are your thoughts please? Any and all constructive criticism is welcome!