So where can we give feedback on typos etc we spot in Juntu’s Floating Ice Hell and Inglorious? The Kickstarter update lists things that would be useful feedback for each, but doesn’t say how to convey that feedback.
Inglorious p29 “all weapons and other implements of war within your become immediately transformed into harmless agricultural implements.” Within your what? Sight? Vicinity?
Inglorious p33 “Compendium classes are simple to make, quick to assemble and in some cases quite easy for characters to qualify for. Because of this, there are a dearth of them available in Dungeon World supplements, in online communities and in other sources.” I think you mean the opposite of dearth. Abundance? Plethora?
Robert Rendell Abundance
Mark Tygart I think I’d go for plethora myself, but that’s because of The Three Amigos 🙂 But I wasn’t searching for antonyms of dearth – the question marks were because I was offering suggestions. And maybe the author really did mean that there’s a dearth of CCs out there, but I don’t believe that’s the case.
Robert Rendell There is a plethora.
Wait, what? Have we got a street date for Inglorious?
There’s been an update on the DW Kickstarter.
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/sage-kobold/dungeon-world-a-game-with-modern-rules-and-old-sch-0/posts/1603165
It’s backers only, unfortunately. It provides links to draft PDFs for feedback on typos etc., but doesn’t say where to send the feedback (hence my original question 🙂
For non-backers, the text reads:
Hey folks, just wanted to keep you up to date on our progress. We’ve got Juntu mostly finished, just waiting on more art and maps. It’s our most art heavy book yet and we’re really liking how it turned out. There are still some layout things to tweak and more art to add, but if you can imagine up your own ship maps it’d be totally playable. Useful feedback: Typos, unclear text, how awesome the arctopus is.
Inglorious is mostly content-complete, except we need to add more armies, encounters, and monsters. Once we finish up art-wrangling Juntu we’ll point artists at Inglorious. Everything in Inglorious should be playable, there’s just some more content and prettying to come. We know the layout isn’t too close to finished. Useful feedback: Playtesting, typos, things you’d like to know more about
Robert Rendell Nice. I’m jealous.