I made a dungeon starter! Looking for feedback.
I’m running my first dungeon world game in a year or so and made this in preparation – wanted to run something a bit more high fantasy than my usual instincts. Would love some feedback if anyone has any suggestions. I’m still not really confident in those questions, but I may have overthought it.
I like it! Question 4 is kinda yes/no, that’ll end up being exposition without tapping the players for info. Check on Coin of Fate.
Like Marshall pointed out, you want open ended questions that lead to conversation. Maybe: “What has distracted you so far from noticing that the very stones and trees of the ruins are closing behind you?” That way they can still decide if they notice it now or not but get to add something unique to the story
Awesome, thanks guys! Updated here: http://cl.ly/3z0y422f2V3t
Seems to be an error with the frogling idol, but great job!
That Rabbit-folk’s fiddle is getting in everywhere! Updated, with the correct Idol (stolen from the Shallow Sea) http://cl.ly/1z3E082w3S0G
No specific feedback aside from what’s above, but this looks great.
This is perfect. I don’t like the long winded traditional D&D style adventures people post on here. They don’t jive with how I see Dungeon World (in the minimalist way). But you have the keynotes down pat
As an old grognard author of long-winded traditional D&D style adventures let me also offer my congrats.
i used your work as a model for dungeon starters: sincerest form of flattery.
Cheers! My version is pretty much directly taken from Marshall Miller. I assume you’ve seen this list? http://dragonsinmyhouse.blogspot.com.au/2014/01/dungeon-world-adventure-starters.html
Yep, we’re fellow groupies. i just wish i had your graphics chops.
Your frog idol issue seems to have returned.
Yeh, I can’t update that original link 🙁 … this is the final version: http://cl.ly/1z3E082w3S0G