Minds will be flayed! Another monster from me, the only one I’m going to post here for a while. Thank you in advance for looking.
Minds will be flayed!
Minds will be flayed!
Minds will be flayed!
Minds will be flayed! Another monster from me, the only one I’m going to post here for a while. Thank you in advance for looking.
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You might want to work on consolidating moves in your monsters. 8 is a bit much, IMHO.
Hm, yeah, how does this sound?
Pull weapons from body
Trap those near in crystal
Know intimate details
Dominate the weak
Give in to decadence
Pull what weapons from whose body? I must say I’m confused. And who gives in to decadence – the monster or or his target?
I’ve changed it to “own body” since. If you have a look the idea of the monster is they are made of a quick growing crystal material.
The monster gives in to decadence, they love treasure and lording over people- Its not so much a move as a reminder of their flaws. Since they are telepathic, I felt they needed a weakness to aid in their downfall.
I think a drawing is going to help if/when I use these fellows.
I’d suggest “Breaks shards off its own body to use as weapons.” And “Weakness: Can be distracted with gold or decadent promises.”
That is much better Wynand, thank you.