Would anyone be interested in giving some feedback on my first draft of my next adventure pack, Welcome to the…

28 thoughts on “Would anyone be interested in giving some feedback on my first draft of my next adventure pack, Welcome to the…”

1. I’ll give it a look-over.

2. Very interested, thank you!

3. I would like to test and promote your adventure for the brazilian players.

4. I am interested too.

5. I would be happy to offer my humble feedback skills.

6. Love to!

7. I’d be happy to give it a read through and give feedback.

8. Thanks for the quick responses, all! You should all get the link shortly.

9. ..interested but i’m a slow reader..

10. No worries Marco Borghi, I’ll add you to the list.

11. I’d like, if you are still looking for feedback.

12. The more the merrier 🙂

13. I can help out

14. Sure! And I like the name 🙂

15. I’d love to look it over and see what a non-DW-vet insights I can give.

16. Interested

17. Thanks for all the offers, guys! I’ve added all of you. I think that’ll do for now.

18. Can I double-check people got the link to the PDF? You should have got a private post a couple of days ago. 

19. I got it!

20. Got it! Just… no time!

21. No worries James Hawthorne … you’re excused 😉 Everyone else – any thoughts so far?

22. I’m glad you sent this follow-up. I’d missed it, but I have it now. Thanks!

23. I didnt

24. Okey dokes Ivan, I’ve sent it to you now.

25. just got it myself. Will try to give it a read over the next few days.

26. Sent first thoughts! Awesome…

27. EDIT – Sounds like you found it Alisson Vitório – good stuff! (Anyone who still doesn’t have the copy, email me: online [at] jbinc.co.uk.)

    I’m working on the second draft now and should have the near-final version ready over Christmas. My group and I wrapped up our “season ender” tonight – the players brought an end to industrial baron Obadiah Cheapfield and his prospecting company on top of his steam-powered floating fortress. (They pushed him out of the window and the druid turned into a stone ox to ensure he couldn’t get away!) Great stuff.

28. Nice! I’m anxious to see this second draft, besides that I’m reading the alpha version right now.

Comments are closed.