I have made new moves for two new races, the Orc and the Dark Elf.

I have made new moves for two new races, the Orc and the Dark Elf.

I have made new moves for two new races, the Orc and the Dark Elf.

Can you give me an opinion?

… and sorry for my bad english!

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ORC

Warrior

Your strenght is higher than other races. When you Defy Danger and use your strenght to your advantage, take +1.

becomes:

Violence flows through your veins. While you wield a weapon it gains the forceful and messy tags.

Ranger

When you Hunt and Track, if you want to kill your prey take +1. If you hate your prey, your roll is at least 7.

Druid

When you make a jewel using teeth, feathers or paws of an animal, and you Shapeshift wearing it, take +1 Hold if you take the form of that animal

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DARK ELF

Warrior

When you attack from the darkness your roll is always at least 7+

becomes:

When you attack from the darkness and deal damage, roll twice and take the better damage result. 

 

Wizard

Your magic is the magic of darkness and shadows. Take Darkness from the cleric’s spells. Is a cantrip for you.

Cleric

Your faith has been forged in the darkness. In addition to the domain of your deity you also take the “Murder and Betrayal” domain. Take one additional precept: betrayal. 

Thief

When you keep still in deep shadows, enemies never spot you until you make a movement.

becomes:

Your race plays with poisons such as children with dolls. Chose one additional poison form the list. You start with two use of it and five use of your first choice. 

OR

Your race plays with poisons such as children with dolls. You know how to use poisons. If you use a poisons in backstab, on a 10+ you can chose to kill your target. 

5 thoughts on “I have made new moves for two new races, the Orc and the Dark Elf.”

  1. Dark Elf Warrior, I don’t know. If you attack someone in the darkness in meele and he doesn’t see you you wouldn’t be rolling H&S and fighters are really so hot about volleying. Maybe extra damage if you attack from the darkness?

    Or could you explain the idea behind the move better?

    Having Cleric and Wizard moves be the same is kind of uninteresting. Maybe something related to Spiders on the cleric?

    You should also think about the Thief and Poisons – the move right now is good but there is a potential to work even more with poisons which seems a really dark elf like thing.

  2. Uhm, a dark elf thief’s move about poisons  is better than now. 

    A cleric move about spiders sounds better. 

    Dark Elf Warrior: uhm…extra dmage for attack from darkness? yes, i like it. 

    Regarding the Orc Druid, the +1 forward becomes +1 hold:

    When you make a jewel using teeth, feathers or paws of an animal, and you Shapeshift wearing it, take +1 Hold if you take the form of that animal

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