I have made new moves for two new races, the Orc and the Dark Elf.
Can you give me an opinion?
… and sorry for my bad english!
Your strenght is higher than other races. When you Defy Danger and use your strenght to your advantage, take +1.
Violence flows through your veins. While you wield a weapon it gains the forceful and messy tags.
When you Hunt and Track, if you want to kill your prey take +1. If you hate your prey, your roll is at least 7.
When you make a jewel using teeth, feathers or paws of an animal, and you Shapeshift wearing it, take +1 Hold if you take the form of that animal
When you attack from the darkness your roll is always at least 7+
When you attack from the darkness and deal damage, roll twice and take the better damage result.
Your magic is the magic of darkness and shadows. Take Darkness from the cleric’s spells. Is a cantrip for you.
Your faith has been forged in the darkness. In addition to the domain of your deity you also take the “Murder and Betrayal” domain. Take one additional precept: betrayal.
When you keep still in deep shadows, enemies never spot you until you make a movement.
Your race plays with poisons such as children with dolls. Chose one additional poison form the list. You start with two use of it and five use of your first choice.
Your race plays with poisons such as children with dolls. You know how to use poisons. If you use a poisons in backstab, on a 10+ you can chose to kill your target.