Completed my first attempt at a playbook – The Revenant. Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated.
The Revenant
You’ve heard the stories of what lies beyond the Black Gates. You laugh because you’ve seen what’s waiting on the other side. You took your Last Breath and died. You may have been a victim, or maybe you deserved it. Either way, you stepped across the final threshold.
Turns out there’s something you need to do before you rest. A wrong that must be righted, revenge to be had, or justice to be served. Whatever it is, you’ve been sent back to get the job done. You’ve been given a second chance on life, but you’re not the person you were before. You’ve tasted death and brought some of it back with you.
There’s hell to pay, and you’re here to collect.
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