I need some help with some custom moves.
This first one is for a Fey. Originally I was just going to use to use “Grant a wish, with a twist” as a monster move but I was wondering if you guys could help me come up with a custom to replace it. Maybe something like
When you ask a Fey to grant a wish, Roll+Cha. On a 10+, your wish is granted. On a 7-9, you wish is granted but with an unforseen twist.
Second one is for traveling through a forest where Fey trick travelers.
When you travel through Fey infested forests, roll+Int. On a 10+, you find it with little issue. On a 7-9, choose 1
-You finally made but the journey left exhausted. Take -1 ongoing until you make camp
– The Fey led you into the path of a hostile creature or into an environmental hazard.
Another one I was work on was a custom move for a Dryad. This is what I have currently but it seems uninteresting.
When you look upon a Dryad’s beauty, roll+Wis. On a 10+, you steel yourself and manage not to fall in love with her. On a 7-9, you manage you resist her partially but you’re still bedazzled. Take -1 ongoing as long as you’re in her presence
Any ideas on how I can improve these?