Hi. Nice work on this new ‘edition’! I’ve been looking at the various playbooks and I just want to give you a little feedback while I go through them.
Specifically, I wanted to bring your attending to the Paladin’s “I am the law” move. As it stands, it does very little for the player. In particular, the choices presented are more of a hinderance than anything. I understand that they are there to work with Judge and Jury, which happens to be just as clanky. It might be hard to keep the balance between moves and this has the possibility to upset things are than most, but I feel you should consider revising it.
Oh, as a side note, perhaps you could bundle together the devout virtues and the chains of faith moves, to reduce clutter even further.