THE GIVING TREE
They say the Giving Tree is a marvel to behold, friend: children play amongst his branches; it sparkles with gift and ribbons and colors; near to it you’ll surely find warm bread and fruit, a soft spoken friend, or silk-like skin.
They say it will give you riches, it will take the dead back from the grave, it will give you anything your heart desires!
Come with us, friend – partake the Tree’s gifts, rejoice!
You have nothing to fear.
Trust me.
As usual, any comment or critique is gladly welcomed.
Andrea Serafini Wonderfully creative but numerous spelling/format/grammar errors require another draft.
(Pot calling kettle black, I know)
Thanks, Mark Tygart
Unfortunately i’m not a native speaker, if there is someone which would like to spend some time to help me with the proofreading, i would be wonderfully glad.
I really enjoyed reading this, and did a quick proofreading pass; hopefully you can see the suggestions I made. Totally adding it to my folder of pick-up-and-play Dungeon World starters.
Your help was damn damn precious – i tried to push the +1 button more than once, but it seems +1 and adding you as editor in the credits is the maximum i can do.
I find the “orderly sexworker” craft suggestion intriguing! Also I suggested some minor edits. Good work!
“Decern Reality” I don’t trust this tree… 😆
And the tree was happy…
…but not really.