Can i get a bit of feedback on these guys here?
I think the moves make for some interesting things in the fiction.
Boomerang (arrow) – it comes back to you in the end
The rest of the Zirki are here:
http://codex.dungeon-world.com/monster/295003
Can i get a bit of feedback on these guys here?
Can i get a bit of feedback on these guys here?
“Pretend to miss and attack on the rebound” love it, describe that it threw a boomarang and see if people clock what is about happen!
“Show her skill” – typo?
but yeah i really like it! 😀
No. The boomerang hunters are female
Ahhh wasn’t aware, maybe change the text “these guys” ^_^
good point!
Are they Zikri or Zirki? You have both spellings two different places.
arrrgghhhhhhh
Thank you Craig
Also, I’d call it Ironwood instead of saying ironwooden.
A couple ideas, FWIW:
Headhunter
Instinct: To serve [the Visionary]/[Crocodile King] or To collect head-trophies
Move: Reveal head-trophies
Visionary
Instinct: To realize the Crocodile King’s dreamvisions
Are these females human? If so, I’d be careful about the possible real-world “savage” or “otherness” these monster templates suggest, if you know what I mean.