I am working on some new spells and have a bit of a quandry. I am not sure the “correct” way to write them in DW.
For example here are two versions of a Bog spell
1. You create a large bog that slows the movement of man-sized or smaller creatures that enter it.
2. You create a bog that slows the movement of up to six man-sized or smaller creatures that enter it.
Both have virtues.
Number 1 is more fictional but potentially ambiguous ( how many man sized creatures can fit in the bog, how many small creatues equal one man sized creature?)
Number 2 is a bit less ambigous, but perhaps not fictional enough.
So what is the correct balance to strike?